review of my 5 a day animation

I am here to review my 5 a day animation of epic meal which i have created using cameras pens and pencils and flash. Overall i would say my 5 a day animation is very detailed and good however it would need more improvements to the graphics of the animation and the effects of the animation could be better. The advantages of the animation is that it is very accurate at spreading the main goal of 5 a day. My disadvantages are that my 5 a day animation may not be very clear or detailed as I expected it to be due to my bad drawing and handwriting so it is not as effective as i thought it would be to the audience. Other improvements to the animation could include good sound and also more colourful effects to add to the animation. The animation could be better with some more improvements however i believe it is a good animation overall since it displays the animation to the direct audience very effectively.